nowadays( 1 )Health is one of the most important topic .
We need have good health in order that (2) study,work
live and so on.How should we do to keep fit? It(3)
needs only exercise, fresh air ,nutritious food (and 删除),(4) drink
and enough sleep, but also mental health. In any
other words ,happy people (are变为have)(5) mentally and physically这两个次都要去掉ly(6)
healthy.In my opinion, good daily habits are good to (7)
one's health. I am careful not to eat food highly in (8)
fat,salt,and sugar. I take exercises every day. Now I (9)
am healthy. I hope (which变为that) "disease"(is变为will be) far away from everyone.(10)
I am careful not to eat food highly in (8)
fat,salt,and sugar我不知道了
Health is one of the most important topic nowadays.(1) topic-topics
We need have good health in order to study,work,(2) need后加to
live and so on.How should we do to keep fit? It(3) how--what
needs only exercise, fresh air ,nutritious food and drink,(4) only前加not
and enough sleep, but also mental health. In any(5) 删any
other words ,happy people are mentally and physically(6) mentally and physically放在healthy后
healthy.In my opinion, good daily habits are good to (7) to--for
one's health. I am careful not to eat food highly in (8) highly--high
fat,salt,and sugar. I take exercises every day. Now I (9) exercises--exercise
am healthy. I hope which "disease"is far away from everyone.(10) which--that
1 topic->topics
2 We need to have
3 What should we do...
4 drink->drinks
5 remove any
6 没错
7 to->for
8 highly->high
9 take exercises->exercise
10 I hope "disease" will be far away...