小学英语日记

It was sunny and hot today. I got up early at half past six. I read English and then had breakfast. I helped my mother washed the dishes. Then I did my homework and cleaned my room. I went shopping with my mother in the afternoon. Then I played table tennis with my friends. In the evening I watched TV and read a book. I really had a busy and interesting day

January 31 2009

Today I am very happy because I am going to buy some books with my elder sister.I will buy the book called The Happy Girl.Do you read it ?I think it will be very interesting .And I will finish my homework in the evening.I think this day will be a happy day!

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